Straight Up by Missy Lyons
Publisher: Phaze Publishing
Length: Short Story (46 pgs)
Other: BDSM, M/F, M/F/M, M/F/F, M/F/M/M, Ménage, Multiple Partners, Voyeurism
Rating: 3.5 cherries
Review by Tiger Lily
The ladies of Vegas share their dirty little secrets in this short but hot collection. This "oral" history explores the intimacies of sex behind closed doors...and on stage.
Making your dreams happen isn’t always easy, but if you can make it fun... then you’re set—Straight Up.
Missy Lyons writes an interesting take on the Vegas stripper that entices and excites the reader. She uses the POV switch to advance the story via four of the dancers. I liked the originality even when I wasn’t sure if there was a true happily ever after for the characters. The variety of experiences portrayed and the central theme of fellatio made the story memorable.
Reading about the different experiences of the girls and how they dealt was fascinating. Although I found it a bit odd that the main character hadn’t experienced giving fellatio, I thought that her forth-right approach to learning was unique. The erotic scenes were indeed steamy and memorable.
The idea of the stories advancing the plot and helping the new girl boost her courage to dance is a unique device to tell the story. Though there was no real antagonist, the pacing of the story kept the reader involved.
If you want a red-hot erotic story guaranteed to make you squirm, then you need to read Straight Up. I give this story 3.5 cherries.