Fun With Dick and Jayne by Delilah Devlin
Publisher: Ellora’s Cave Publishing
Length: Short Story (86 pgs)
Other: BDSM, M/F, M/F/M, Ménage, Toys, Fisting, Spanking, Voyeurism
Rating: 4 cherries
Reviewed by Anthurium
He didn’t know the nightly peepshow was just a naughty invitation…
Garrett knows what he’s doing can get him into trouble, but he can’t help himself. Every night, as he arrives home, the blonde across the alley gets busy with her boyfriend with the blinds open. He’s spent the past two weeks getting an eyeful and falling deep into lust.
But when Garrett sees a man in a black ski mask sneak into his sexy neighbor’s bedroom, he doesn’t know he’ll be the one captured.
Jayne has a nice life with a nice lover who sees to her every need, but she’s still drawn to the lonely man across the alley. She’s been sharing her deepest fantasies with him from afar, but is ready to up the stakes. When she talks Richard into enacting a dangerous scenario, everything works out as planned. Only Garrett’s not happy about being played. And he’s got reservations because she already has a lover and he’s not into threesomes. Guess she’ll just have to convince him otherwise.
This short story is a very hot read. The story has strong characters and the voyeurism aspect pulled the reader right into the story. You could feel the conflicts that Garrett fought with as he was drawn into Jayne and Dick's web.
I found this story to be very believable, if a bit fanciful. I felt bad for Garrett as he dealt with his lonely heart and innermost longings, and I even could sympathize with Jayne, although I would like to have her problems. I especially liked the scene with the toy in the restaurant, that was hot, beyond belief, I don't want to tell too much and spoil the surprise for the reader, but it was certainly fun.
The writing in this story was very good, and made for a very hot quick read, that should tempt any reader of this type of story. I give it four cherries.