Afternoon Delight by Ronna Gage
Publisher: Freya’s Bower
Length: Short Story (8 pgs)
Other: BDSM, M/F, Anal Play, Voyeurism
Rating: 3.5 cherries
Reviewed by Peppermint
After thirteen years of marriage, communication can be a key to a happy marriage, but if you don’t discuss the most intimate of desires what is left?
Sean and Maudi find the answer to the very question. When Sean comes home early, a stranger is in his bed--the most erotic, alluring woman of his dreams….his wife. The secrets he learns in the accidental encounter is well, an afternoon filled with delights.
When Sean came home to surprise his wife, little did he know he would be the one surprised. When he walked in on his wife masturbating he wasn’t sure whether to watch or join in.
I enjoyed the plot of this story. Sean and Maudi did not realize they both wanted something more from each other in the bedroom. So instead of expressing their feelings during the years they were together, they suppressed them. So many couples go through this dilemma, there is no way you can see this story as unrealistic.
The main problem I had was that it was just too short -- only eight pages. With so few pages, you really can't get a lot of insight into the characters. You know absolutely nothing about the couple other than they are married with two kids, and you don't get a good feel for who they are. But, since the plot did not falter I was able to get past the lack of character description to enjoy the story.
If you are looking for a quick lesson on communicating your sexual needs, graphically illustrated by some hot daytime loving, this story may have a few tips for you.