Fallen by Ava Delany
Publisher: Breathless Press
Length: Short Story (29 pgs)
Other: BDSM, M/F, Spanking, Anal Sex, Voyeurism
Rating: 3.5 cherries
Reviewed by Tiger Lily
Straitlaced Mandy never does anything wild. She's never even had an orgasm, but when friends take her to a fetish club to celebrate her twenty-fifth birthday, all that will change.
Peter may be a buttoned-down market analyst, but he'll show Mandy that corporate and wild can mix very well.
Uptight meets uptight...what do you think will happen?
Ava Delany’s work is always hot and fast paced. This book is no exception. It’s spicy and delivers the right amount of kink to keep the reader happy. It’s a short story, so the plot happens fast—almost too fast in spots. I wanted to know more about the characters and what happened after the story. I love seeing how things work out after the last page.
I liked Mandy and Peter. In their respective ways, they are two repressed people. He’s a workaholic who wants a woman into kink. She’s in deathly fear that if she let’s go and lives a little, bad things will happen. It was easy to feel for her because she’s got issues that would be hard for lots of people to deal with. I wanted to see her get her happy ending, even if it meant coming at the end of a spanking session. Peter on the other hand, was a bit harder to come to like. He likes a woman who can handle a bit of spanking, a little anal sex, and come back for more. I liked his honesty, but I wanted to see more out of him. We get a tantalizing taste of him and it’s nice. But I wanted the full bite.
The sex scenes certainly scorch. I needed a fan and a cool drink with this one, but it was worth it.
If you want a steamy story that packs a punch, you’ll want to read Fallen. I give this short story 3.5 cherries.