Lucifer’s Slave by Gail Starbright
Publisher: Ellora’s Cave
Length: Short Story (75 pgs)
Other: BDSM, M/F, M/F/M, F/F, Ménage, Anal Play, Fetish, Toys, Spanking, Voyeurism
Rating: 3.5 cherries
Reviewed by Peppermint
Jacqueline is the newest slave in an exclusive BDSM group called the Dark Masters. As such, she is expected to follow only three simple rules.
Rule one, obey.
Rule two, submit.
Rule three, see rules one and two.
Although the rules are simple, the devil is in the details. The group’s three rules apply for all Doms and Dommes, which means Jacqueline is expected to sexually service men, women and even multiple partners.
Among such demanding Masters and Mistresses, the last thing Jacqueline expects is to be collared by a Dom…let alone by two.
“You will be Lucifer’s Slave”. That is what the fortuneteller had told Jacqueline. Jacqueline was sure there was no way she would meet the prince of darkness himself but she did intend on being someone’s slave before the night’s end.
Jacqueline’s dedication and obedience really struck me. While I like most BDSM stories I have read, the subs tend to have a little bit of a defiance even if it is just to get punished. Jacqueline seems to be the perfect little slave doing what Master Reaper and Master Lucifer say even when she feels uncomfortable. While this is a positive when dealing with these two you can also see how Jacqueline’s blind obedience could get her in trouble if she was to find the wrong Dom or Domme. But with Master Reaper and Master Lucifer it allowed her to experience some fantasies of her own as well as assist in fulfilling a few of theirs.
Although I got a feel for whom Jacqueline, Master Reaper and Master Lucifer were in the BDSM scene I know nothing about their regular lives. This made it a little hard for me to connect with them since I was required to connect with a character of a character. I would have liked to have gotten to know who the individuals were as well as whom they were in the BDSM scene even if just a little.
I did enjoy the fact that both Master Reaper and Master Lucifer did not want Jacqueline to be a temporary trainee. Both had originally just been trying to introduce her to the Dark Masters and making sure she would fit in within their particular scene. In the end things seemed to work out perfectly and everyone got exactly what they needed. What I didn’t understand is why at least Master Lucifer agreed to not acquire any more subs other than Jacqueline. She had at least two masters and Master Lucifer had every intention on watching her with at least one dominatrix if not more. It just seemed odd for a sub to be able to have multiple partners and not a Dom, but then again I do not know much about the real world of BDSM, just the fictional one I read in stories.
As far as kinky sex goes there are not many stories that get kinkier than this. You get a little bit of everything which I completely enjoyed. If you are not into spanking you may want to skip the caning scenes, but then you would miss Master Reaper rubbing down Jacqueline’s red ass. When Master Reaper and Master Lucifer come out and play, they play for keeps and you will definitely keep coming back for more. If you are in the market for a kinky story that's all BDSM all the time, this one may be for you.