Dark Submission by A.J. Hardcourt
Publisher: Demanding Romance
Length: Short Story (19 pgs)
Other: BDSM, M/M, M/M/M, M/M/M/M, Ménage, Multiple Partners, Anal Play, Forced Seduction, Toys, Spanking, Voyeurism
Rating: 4.5 cherries
Reviewed by Peppermint
Kyler’s fantasy is to be bound, gagged and forced to submit…a dark submission.
In the middle of the night, two men, Masters, enter his home, his room…and his bed. And they are about to make his fantasy reality. Only he doesn’t know who they are.
Behind the slave hood, it doesn’t matter that in his mind and heart he would never cheat on his partner, Brian. His responses reveal just how much he aches for the pain and pleasure of BDSM. But in surrendering he’ll betray his lover because Brian could never be his Master, would never understand his submissive needs.
Or does Brian have secrets of his own?
If only someone would break into my house and force pleasure on me. They don’t want money or goods just Kyler’s sweet rump. Kyler doesn’t want to cheat on his lover Brian, but who wouldn’t get excited over two Dom’s wanting him to please him?
This story was very short so I didn’t really get a sense of who the characters were but I did get the feeling that they both cared deeply for one another. Kyler had not been able to embrace his dark desires because he assumed that Brian would not approve. What Kyler did not realize is that Brian wanted Kyler’s pleasure as well as his own. Then two Dom’s break into the apartment. What are these boys to do?
I think the secrecy presented at the beginning of this story gives it an exciting little twist. Kyler has no idea who these two guys are in his room but he quickly recognizes one thing -- they want more than just a few dollars. They want his body and he is helpless to do anything about it. These two strangers also awake something inside of him he had been trying to hide and not knowing who they are added to his arousal. As a reader I was both appalled and exhilarated all at once so I can imagine how Kyler felt.
I have included spanking as a tag for this story, but it's really whipping. This whipping does not draw blood but it is part of the foreplay. So if whipping is not necessarily your kink, you may want to skip past that part. Also I want to clarify that this is a forced seduction scene not a rape scene. When I read the blurb and started the story I was a little worried that the scene would start as rape prior to Kyler consenting to his assailants but that is not the case.
It is a shame this is such a short story because with the storyline he had the potential to be a great full length story. I also think the author left enough room for them to create a follow-up full length story so hopefully we will see that in the future. In the meantime enjoy this quickly just as I did.