Communion by Mallory Path
Publisher: eXcessica Publishing
Length: Short Story (20 pgs)
Other: BDSM, M/M, M/M/M, M/M/M/M/M, Ménage, Multiple Partners, Anal Play, Toys, Voyeurism
Rating: 3.5 cherries
Reviewed by Peppermint
Tig, Vincent, Patrick, Colin, and Justin are long-time friends, but even the best of friends have secrets. Revelations can bring people closer, or tear them apart. That's the chance Tig took when he confessed his desire for D/s intimacy to Vincent, Patrick and Colin. It has led to a very satisfying arrangement among them, although they've kept their relationship and BDSM activities from Justin.
Now the time has come for Tig to risk himself again: with the others' help and support, he's ready to bring his desires to Justin, along with a confession of love.
Since taking up with Patrick and Colin, Vincent has seen and done more than he imagined possible, and he thought he knew what they were all getting into—but after tonight, nothing will ever be the same between these five friends.
Five roommates and one bed can only lead to one thing. While the story focuses around mainly Tig and Justin, the other three roommates are not left out. Lucky for them Justin learned how to share his toys as a child because Tig is one sexy toy.
This story has naughty written all over it. Who would have thought that two dominants and three submissives would make such good bed partners? Vincent is clearly the most dominant of all of them but he allows Justin to lead for this sexual encounter because he knows he needs it as much as Tig does. Trust me, considering what Justin has in mind no one will mind him taking the dominant position in the least bit.
The fact that this story is so short is really its weakness. The author is forced to jump right into the story and with five characters. This left me a little confused between who was who. A few times I had to stop reading to regroup myself just to remember each character's role. I also believe with the story this length (only 20 pages) the author cannot dedicate a lot of details to a particular scene, leaving me feeling a little disconnected at times. I think the story line is a great one and with a little longer story this author would have been unstoppable.
The characters all seem to know exactly what each other want and need and are willing to give that to each other. It is obvious that a part of Tig needs all four of these men. He needs to feel completely controlled and loved. Lucky for him he found roommates will do to all of this.
If you are looking for a short story that will both entice your sexual nature while leaving you feeling all warm and fuzzy inside give this one a try.