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Tuesday, August 16, 2011

A Very Personal Trainer by Justine Elyot



A Very Personal Trainer by Justine Elyot
Publisher: Total-E-Bound
Genre: Contemporary
Length: Short Story (52 pages)
Other: M/F, BDSM, Spanking, Bondage, Anal, Fetish
Rating: 4 Cherries
Reviewed by Silverlace

Lara lacks self-discipline but Dexter knows how to give it to her.

Lara’s life is in a mess, and she needs help to sort it out. But when she hires a personal organiser, she has no idea just how personal his service is going to be.

Together, Lara and Dexter work out that she needs that little bit of extra motivation to keep her on track, and the way that motivation is delivered introduces Lara to a world of painful pleasure she has only previously dreamed of.

A lovely, humorous story about a woman who really does need A Very Personal Trainer to get her life in order.

Lara is compulsively disorganized. Everything in her life is a mess until an exasperated friend recommends a life coach to help her get back on track. She soon develops an attraction for stern but good-looking Dexter and is a little nervous at the idea of disappointing him, although she finds it hard to separate the fear from the lust and wonders whether the two go hand-in-hand. At first Lara manages to stick to the program but after a couple of weeks she starts slipping back into her old habits. When Dexter realizes she is letting things slip, Lara mentions she has a real problem with self-discipline and, well, maybe she needs someone to take care of that for her. As they discuss the matter they both realise that it’s a Dom she needs more than a life coach.

Dexter has had approaches of this type from clients in the past but Lara is the only one he has agreed to act as a Dom for and, as it turns out, he is far from inexperienced. Naturally Dexter thinks Lara should sample what she may be getting herself into and shows Lara the difference between nice and nasty spankings there and then, as well as having her masturbate for him afterwards when he realises how excited she is getting.

As the story develops, it becomes clear that Dexter is something of a mystery man and their relationship comes to a crux over his secretive behaviour. After some detective work on Lara’s part, Dexter catches her peering through his window and isn’t too pleased about her spying. Cue one hot sex and discipline scene, after which Dexter explains why so much secrecy was necessary and asks whether Lara is prepared to live like that. Read the story yourself to find out about “the Dreaded Cupboard” and why there is a spreadsheet involved. I had a smile on my face most of the way through this story.

A Very Personal Trainer is written in a snappy and humorous style and I’d highly recommend it to those who prefer stories involving spanking and discipline rather than whips and chains. I really enjoyed this short story and my only complaint is that it wasn’t long enough!


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